Here is Arona's tallit, complete with the tucks. Arona came by last night to try it on, and she was much happier with the fit.
I love how the tucks give a tallit-like geometry to the less than traditional eyelet. I also love how the tucks fit in with how eyelet is traditionally worked. In this case, the fix made the tallit better than it was before.
I will deliver the tallit to her house later on today.